Monday, March 31, 2008

Prospectus Questions/Concerns

1. Although the author takes an even-handed approach to the subject of plagiarism, he or she does not give their personal opinion on the subject. Should this be included in the prospectus?

2. The author could have done a better job of explaining the topics he or she will be discussing in the introductory paragraph. Also, a well defined thesis in the introductory paragraph would help to round out the authors purpose.

3. The author needs to work on the transitions between paragraphs. Although the paper had a good tone, stronger transitions would have helped the paper flow more smoothly.

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